How tragic! And I love the end too....
Very well written, you have talent. I hope I can read some more of your stories.

it made me cry because the story was like my life until i got away from it its lovly

This story is very well written, I actually wanted you to keep going. Your story actually made me physically and mentally ready. Well done

You know i like sad stories, and this is the only one that makes me feel sad. i hope you do well.

This was very moving and it was well written. The ending was wonderful and by far my favorite part!

A really good and sad story