I'm a Forgotten Picture Frame Reviews
2 reviews have given an average rating of 4 out of 5 Stars
I like some of the imagery and imaginative use of metaphors, like "I'm a forgotten picture frame." Overall, however, it's rather glum and self-pitying, and it seems a bit lazy with phrases like "I'm just so lonely."
PoeticT its meant to be glum its about being alone [nods head] and the wording I didn't wish to overly word this with to many metaphors, simplicity is sometime smarter than overly thought wording
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I love this, gives off a nostalgic feel!
PoeticT thanks Auron :) glad you enjoyed it
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