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brilliant start. Please write some more....

this is beautiful!

Excellent! Made me laugh

WOW - if this is true, I really feel for you. The writing is very powerful. The person you write about is not in the least 'selfish' at all but a very brave and beautiful person.
I wish you all the best

intriguing
I hope to read more

Am intrigued..... Great start.
Are there any more instalments? I hope so

Fantastic story.....

How tragic! And I love the end too....
Very well written, you have talent. I hope I can read some more of your stories.