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WOW - if this is true, I really feel for you. The writing is very powerful. The person you write about is not in the least 'selfish' at all but a very brave and beautiful person.
I wish you all the best

What a tragic story & very well written, Well done

intriguing
I hope to read more

Are you going to carry on with your story?

Brilliantly observed, and well-written. Bravo!

Great story. Interesting, suspenseful and thought-provoking.

Brilliant. I love it.

Really enjoyed your story. Nice build-up of the characters.
Shame about a few spelling mistakes like:
house being reprocessed instead of repossessed, or taught face instead of taut (Hope you don't think that is being pernickety)
Look forward to reading more....