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In the smoothly paragraph there are two the's in it in like sentence 8 but I still enjoyed the story.

This one was better at the vocabulary than the last one and I enjoyed them both. Great Job! can't wait for a chapter three!

Great Job!

Great Job!

Great Job!

This was a very good story!

ever since I have started high school I have been bullied and I have someone in my life that cares about me so much and his name is prestyn. we have been talking for a while but he always helps me get through my worst times when i really need him so many people have betrayed me and your story to me was so inspiring. it helps me know how much many people love me and it helps me know that people really care and it doesn't matter if a couple dont like me and i really loved reading your story I have made many stories of my own if you want to check them out just look me up and you will find my stories on here. thank you for your hard work you put into this

This is a very heartwarming story, Animals mean the world to me. Anytime I see one that was abandoned and left on the street I always just want to give it the help it needs. But of course mom says we cant but I have always wanted to be a vet or a marine biologist to help those animals that are in need. Animals to me mean bestfriend and family so never forget them. Animals mean more than people to me, the reason for that is because I get bullied and the only thing that is there for me are my animals.