Myrawiles

great job i love this story and was magnificent

This story really puts you on edge. If my friend was in the locker and the man knew about it I would have gone after my friend, if I died at least my friend wouldn't. The note at the end is very good. Keep it up!

This was a very good story!

I have been bullied for three and a half years now and it's not fun. I have cut and cried all the time. I was always so kind and caring to others around me but then it all changed. I am rude to everyone I love and care about, I push them away and I tell them I'm fine all the time. One day my parents saw the cuts and they had beat me. Literally beat me. I am trying to change but it's really hard and I just wanted to let you know that your story really touched my heart. When people ask me how I am I always tell them I'm fine and they walk away. It hurts me to see that they can't tell that I'm in pain, and they were my best friends. I had always thought to myself how could they know whether I was fine or not, they couldn't because they can't read my inner thoughts is what I always told myself, but then I thought they don't look into my eyes to realize that I'm not fine. They don't even try to see what is happening. But thank you for this heartwarming story.

WOW!!!!!

YO GREAT STORY BRO

This was a great story!

I love this story